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Cool stuff reviews 5#

Welcome to cool stuff reviews! Today’s subject is the Hanmer Springs waterpark, the superbowl!

Superbowl

The superbowl is a waterslide to remember. You shoot down a dark tunnel and spin around the sides of the superbowl. Then, when you slow down, you spin slowly round the centre and fall down the hole! You can even go with your friend on a double ring! You have to go on inflatable doughnuts.

Rating:***

Sometimes you get stuck in the hole.

The savage journey Part 7

Epilogue

They stumbled and crawled away from the blast, following the door guard. They finally reached something like the door in the under world.”Jump in!” said the door guard. Without hesitation, they pounced in. They came out, the same place. “How does this help us!” said Sliney. “Are you blind?”said Skil. “Look at your self!”. Sliney and the rest of them had a blue shield.”To save the world,run into the lava!”said the door guard. “WHAT!?!” shouted the mountain monsters. “Just do it!’said the door guard. So they closed their eyes and jumped. They woke up in the mountain monster’s HQ with no scratch or bruise. “Wh…Wh…What?” the mountain monsters mumbled. “I guess I am part of the mountain monsters now?” said the door guard. “YES!” They said. “Your adventurer name is …ummm”said Skullow. “Best Black!” “Three cheers for Best Black!” Skil said. “HipHipHOORAY, HipHipHOORAY, HipHipHOORAY!”

THE END

The savage journey 2

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The savage journey Part 6

Chapter 5

The escape

“I guard a door that looks like that,”said the door guard.”Now lets go through that door! I feel like time is running out!” “Wh…” said said Porbite.”NEVER MIND!” shouted the door guard. “JUST JUMP THROUGH!”He screamed grabbing them and flinging him and the mountain monsters through the portal. BOOM! Lava and rock got thrown every where, flying out of the door. “Quick! Run!” said Porbite. “That won’t work.” said the door guard. “Come with me.”

Chapter 6

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The Savage journey Part 5

Chapter 4

The other door

As the door guard got pulled out, The Mountain Monsters realised that he was unconscious. Sliney gave him adrenaline and he suddenly sprung up. “ME JOINING YOU!”said the door guard.”WAHOO!” he said.”I AM YOUR BIGGEST FAN!”.”NO 1#!”.Sliney,Skil and Skullow sighed with relief. Just that moment, Porbite raced to them. “Look!”He said. “Come here!”. They followed Porbite till they saw…a door.”Hey!”said the door guard. “That looks like the door I guard!”.”What do you mean?”said Skullow.”Well…”said the door guard.

Chapter 5

Coming Soon!

 

The savage journey Part 4

Chapter 3

The Underworld

Walking out of the park, The Mountain Monsters drag the sack out of the park. “Boy, you weigh a tonne!” grunted Sliney. A muffled mumble came from the sack. “What?”Porbite said.”We ca…”. Porbite tripped,hitting Sliney, making him drop the sack and they all went plummeting down a…a…to be honest, we didn’t know what we fell into. Once we regained consciousness, we saw lava slowly flowing towards us. Porbite got such a fright that he ran away like a baby. “Come on Porbite!”said Skullow.”Anyway, take him out of the sack. Skil pulled the door guard out of the sack.

Chapter 4

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The savage journey Part 3

Chapter 2

The crew

Skil,Porbite,Sliney and Skilo
Skil,Porbite,Sliney and Skullow.

Tourists got their cameras ready, fans screamed in excitement, and everybody stared. It was the famous explorers, ‘The Mountain Monsters’, walking down the zebra crossing to the airport. As they boarded their private plane, fans knocked wildly on the window where ‘Skullow’ was sitting. As the plane took off, some fans took off to. After landing, The Mountain Monsters sat under a tree in a local park. “Hey you!” said Skil. He was talking to the door guard.”Yes?”the door guard said.’You want to solve this new mystery with us?”said Skil. “Uh…………” the door guard said.”Never mind” said Skil and put him in a sack.

Chapter 3

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The savage journey Part 2

Chapter 1

The first door

Don't mess with this beast!
The door guard.

The door guard was watching the sun set as the night closed down on him.” I dream of riding the wind to where troubles melt like butter… Oh, how I want to, but I am stuck here guarding this stupid door and if I put my dreams into action I will be  executed. Maybe I can escape? No chance. I don’t even know what’s so special about the *!#(&)%$ door! Life is so boring. I wish I was dead.”

Chapter 2

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